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After-Dinner Mint
By MercyRain
your post-sex smiles
laughing beautiful
smiling in the nakedness
wrapped in warmth of lover’s flesh
wrapped in warmth of love’s
embrace
where pain and hate are eased from the world
reduced
to the damp of the sheets
brushing the hairs from the teeth
living in Heaven
I could die here in your arms
and
never notice
longing
the moon in your eyes
the blossom
in your smile
the naked truth in your touch
previously published in "Experimental Forest"
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Copyright 2005 MercyRain
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A former member wrote:
This was sexy. Love those feelings. =)
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On Thursday, December 14, 2006, Doc
(145)
wrote:
beauty, without sublty
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On Tuesday, March 15, 2005, Lotophagi
(333) wrote:
superb write... so tangible and almost reachable, but it just manages to escape my fingertips, wonderful, wonderful feeling evoked from this piece. Yummm. Thank you.
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On Wednesday, January 12, 2005, stormtalk
(729) wrote:
This assembles the soul of sex into a few short words, as only poetry could... the first line was perfect; sucked me in like an industrial vacuum cleaner, and the progression from the raunchy hair comment to the beautiful ending was masterful.
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On Wednesday, January 12, 2005, ardneK
(73) wrote:
beautiful, just beautiful "where pain and hate are eased from the world"... Love that - >|
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On Wednesday, January 12, 2005, Anth
(1133) wrote:
the feeling this creates, in the way its written i s so utterly beautiful, just the way you put it, poetry incarnate, another amazing work from you
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On Wednesday, January 12, 2005, Sin
(1168) wrote:
this was so soft and sensual..utterly lovely, the last stanza was amazing ~kristy
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