Prove It

By Savannah

Prove It

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Copyright 2004 Savannah
Published on Saturday, December 25, 2004.     Filed under: "Graphic Art"
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  • blue On Wednesday, October 26, 2005, blue (1454)By person wrote:

    :) ahhh... the reliability of others. ;) loved the hearts and your handwriting is really nice. The ashtray to me adds a whole new dimension to this. Great job love :) ~b

  • A former member wrote: very amazing....I loved it

  • Saint_Reaper On Wednesday, March 16, 2005, Saint_Reaper (203)By person wrote:

    holy shit, this gave me the goose bumbs... i like it ~saint~

  • Soulfire On Wednesday, January 19, 2005, Soulfire (97)By person wrote:

    *chills* very good

  • stormtalk On Monday, January 17, 2005, stormtalk (729)By person wrote:

    Hahaha! I'm not sure if this was meant to be funny, but the ending cracked me up. It's nice to finally read a suicide poem with a sense of humor, not just some mindless droning about how life sucks and then you die (or kill yourself).

  • Rone4611 On Friday, January 7, 2005, Rone4611 (123)By person wrote:

    cigs - $15.00, Brown paper - $5.00, moving poetry... priceless

  • The Crimson Queen On Wednesday, January 5, 2005, The Crimson Queen (918)By person wrote:

    i enjoyed this greatly, very creative.

  • A former member wrote: nice handwritting

  • BeautifulCalamity On Friday, December 31, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (428)By person wrote:

    i liked the ending, as well as the repetition and certain lines in every stanza. . the color of the paper and the cigs add plenty to this, its rustic. . and beautiful handwriting as well.. nice piece

  • Dancing_Monkey On Tuesday, December 28, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1246)By person wrote:

    ... I like it

  • Kitt On Monday, December 27, 2004, Kitt (17)By person wrote:

    spifilicious. pretty handwriting as well. :) [kitt]

  • DarkWolf On Monday, December 27, 2004, DarkWolf (415)By person wrote:

    How twisted and wonderful. "Kill me if you love me" I love the sentiment. Touching in a Dark way. :) -Michael

  • A former member wrote: aw this is greeaatt. the presentation was good, though I would have liked it plain too. Great work.

  • OLd SouL On Sunday, December 26, 2004, OLd SouL (732)By person wrote:

    presentation really added alot to this.. I thoroughly enjoyed it until the last verse. Excellent job. :::OLd

  • A former member wrote: awesome

  • K_Love On Sunday, December 26, 2004, K_Love (525)By person wrote:

    The discolored like paper and the cigg butts add something to this. Very beautiful, I'm amazed. The hand writing is lovely also :)

  • A former member wrote: wow, "intense" doesnt even say it, im speachless...nice work.

  • AniDayz On Saturday, December 25, 2004, AniDayz (820)By person wrote:

    sorry if im reading more into this than you had wanted...]

  • AniDayz On Saturday, December 25, 2004, AniDayz (820)By person wrote:

    yowwww...hold up there sweetheart... 'if you want something done right, you have to do it yourself...'---LOVE YOURSELF man...thats alls you gotta do right.... this jerks some tears inside of me,a feeling i know, but its not the way its got to be...[

  • sIo On Saturday, December 25, 2004, sIo (926)By person wrote:

    this was fucked up and awesome in itself. i love it

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