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R.I.P. Precious One
By JiNx
Rest in peace precious one
She's becoming more broken and blue
Her eyes burning in the sun
Thinking of nothing but you
and her beauty has no limits
Her mind wonders
Staring at nothing as she sits
Drifting even farther
One day to be my angel
Slowly she falls
Someday to be a archangel
Trapped by these walls
Searching for the distant light
As she begins to fade
Wishing to see the stars tonight
Becoming more frayed
Wanting to feel your touch
Just one last time
Desiring you just as much
Trying to find her rhyme
Walking a never ending path
Waiting to see the end
Hiding from surrounding wrath
Hoping to mend
Not ready to die
Or lose her one true life
Inside she's screaming WHY?!?!
Overwhelming feelings of strife
Still having a life to live
Craving health and ecstasy
Still wishing to forgive
As she drifts away in another fantasy..
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Copyright 2004 Jessie Nicole
Published on Tuesday, December 21, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "R.I.P. Precious One"
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On Wednesday, December 29, 2004, BeautifulCalamity
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wrote:
i've not lost anyone, but I'm sure I can only imagine what it must be like. "As she begins to fade Wishing to see the stars tonight". . a beautifully saddening work, nicely done
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A former member wrote:
You strike a chord...Life can be cruel shit, stealing those from us that make us shine........ i applaud the beauty in your pain and expressivness of your writing,
it is terribly hard to deal with a loss...stay strong..beautifully sad work..
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On Wednesday, December 22, 2004, Elise
(187) wrote:
Oh Jess, this was so sad, I'll be here to listen if ever you need me. Its a hard thing to lose someone *hugs tight and comforts* I like the flow of it, but worry about you as well.
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On Wednesday, December 22, 2004, JiNx
(98) wrote:
*huggles* Elise Thank you..
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