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For Sarah about STUPID Rob
By rondant
Your standing on the edge of goodbye
Wondering why you even gave him another try
He says he loves you, but how can you tell
When all he does is fuss and yell
Is he worth all the tears you cry
Because I don't get it, I'm wondering why
You're not happy, this I much I know
Why don't you tell him to get out...and just go
Life would be better, just wait and see
Just how good it could truely be.
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Copyright 2004 rondant
Published on Thursday, December 16, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Wednesday, June 6, 2012, With love_Crow
(82)
wrote:
A desperate message to reach a good friend. I hope everything went well.
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A former member wrote:
i can relate so closely to this... love it, awseome job:)
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On Monday, March 13, 2006, D3ADT0WN
(185) wrote:
Wow...Great job on this one
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A former member wrote:
Wonderful work
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A former member wrote:
wow, nice write. good job
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On Thursday, December 16, 2004, Silent Assassin
(108) wrote:
This reminds me of my ex. Actually both of them. I only wish the last line to come true for her.
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A former member wrote:
I just hope Sarah listens to you.
~Shane~
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