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soldier
By toy soldier
"They" are told when where and how
but never given a reason why
just a likeness of a person
just a shadow
a vague shape cast upon the ground
walked on and over looked
identical to the rest
no depth
..
no voice
..
no face
..
no fealings
..
lined up in a row and forgotten
"They" are what you read about in books or see or tv
"They" are just fiction
"They" don't exist
now i know better.
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Copyright 2004 toy soldier
Published on Tuesday, November 30, 2004.
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A former member wrote:
I really liked how this poet related "reality" to fiction. After all the reality we have created as a society, is in fact all an illusion. Media is manipulation, debt is fiction, government is a corporation, money is a hoax.
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A former member wrote:
this is very interesting...and the ending was a loaded gun. this poem fascinates me, and it's so devastatingly portrayed.
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On Wednesday, December 7, 2005, lordshadow
(153)
wrote:
you nailed it. put into words something I never really wanted to, but you did it and it was awesome.
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On Wednesday, October 26, 2005, Army Barbie
(324) wrote:
You're giving me the perspective I only hear about when my soldier writes home. It makes me...I dunno...feel something. I'm not sure what it is. ' "They" don't exist' except for inside the ones "they" leave behind.
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On Thursday, July 14, 2005, Butterfly
(99) wrote:
And you tell me that you're no poet. You're Such a silly, silly boy, mikey. Erica
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On Monday, March 21, 2005, TropicalSnowstorm
(1703) wrote:
ha, ha! Right on, my man. Ciao, T/S
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A former member wrote:
one, you misspelled feelings and two this poem is making me want to write a response poem. This is a very powerful point of view and very insightful
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On Tuesday, March 22, 2005, toy soldier
(26) wrote:
hey good call on the spelling:)
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On Monday, January 10, 2005, stormtalk
(729) wrote:
This was an unusual perspective - always a treat. How does it feel to be one of "them"? To fight the battles someone else decides need to be fought? To be, in the most literal sense, a pawn? Wouldn't you rather be a "knight," or a "bishop"?
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A former member wrote:
wow. good write
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A former member wrote:
This was heartfelt, and I'm glad you "know better". Without you "soldiers", where would us so-called "other people" be? Would we have a right to exist "without you"? Great write. Thank you.
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On Wednesday, December 1, 2004, Zhee
(529) wrote:
wonderfully said!
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On Tuesday, November 30, 2004, Six-Out
(1435) wrote:
I know many soldiers, and I know they are people. This was a great write, since it does indeed hold true for many people.
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A former member wrote:
i liked this very nice
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