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Performing Cunnilingus on a Succubus
By Zahgurim
Her body
Woven by Madames of Midnight
Come to take away your pain
Her mind
Lifted from a place of forgotten
madness
Luring you
To take unto her, the conscious
being that is your sight
So yoou can't tell when she is
robbing you blind
The Perception of a Sucker:
She speaks the sweetest words
With bitter, yet delicious intentions
Sugarcoated lips securing rough
textures, touchable on a
hallucinagenic high
The Perception a The Sucker:
She speaks the sweetest words
With devious, yet delicious
intentions
Sugarcoated lips securely fasten
once dormant chest pressure
Pressure building from yesterday's
catch
From yesterday's repetitive future
Her potential sits like an indian,
cradling her greed and disgust for
progression
You can see she bore twins
But the father skipped town on a
3am train and now resides with worms
Her legs have been shaved to the
point of revealing muscle tissue
Dripping below her ankles to leave
a bare, red trail into tomorrow
A trail matching her lips
Whispering. . .
"You know where I'm going, but did
you see me coming?"
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Copyright 2004 Mr Cottontail
Published on Wednesday, October 27, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Performing Cunnilingus on a Succubus"
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A former member wrote:
Holy fucking hell. "Her legs have been shaved to the
point of revealing muscle tissue
Dripping below her ankles to leave
a bare, red trail into tomorrow" Vivid as hell.. excellent write.
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On Thursday, October 28, 2004, Zhee
(529)
wrote:
very graphic.. wonderful imagery...
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On Thursday, October 28, 2004, EviscerationX
(7) wrote:
Holy crap!! Well...that's about it =) Good stuff, man.
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On Wednesday, October 27, 2004, DarkDruidess
(326) wrote:
whoa...this one got me...what incredible writing...
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On Wednesday, October 27, 2004, Johny_D_Lewis
(467) wrote:
*shudders* that line about shaving to the point of revealing muscle sounds painful. Excellent visuals ^_^
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On Wednesday, October 27, 2004, Delphoid-Q
(213) wrote:
Agreed.
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On Wednesday, October 27, 2004, agentlemenspromise
(42) wrote:
cunnilingus on a demon. always fun to get the incureable disease.lol great work
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