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Comercialism
By liquid_emotion
The world is pink and red
hearts doodled with a pen
Cupid is flying ahead
To cure the lonely men
Some say it's pain undo
For those of us alone
But I have to disagree
Although I'm cynic prone
Because the world is always pink
When sipping on good wine
And since I'm drinking alone
The entire bottle is mine!
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Copyright 2003 liquid_emotion
Published on Friday, February 14, 2003.
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On Friday, May 9, 2003, CorruptedLittleGirl
(243)
wrote:
I love this! Great rhythm! You are awesome, liquid_emotion!
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On Monday, May 5, 2003, IceDragoness
(193) wrote:
Very cute ~Dawn
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On Friday, April 25, 2003, DoctorAsh
(371) wrote:
HA ... the world is always pink, when sipping on good wine ... i love it ..
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A former member wrote:
the entire bottle is mine.. spoken like a true lush. girl after my own heart.
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On Thursday, February 20, 2003, Jonas
(715) wrote:
fuck yea! and once again for good measure holy-cow-fuck yea! that's hitting the nail on the head.
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A former member wrote:
this goes straight to heart for me. hehe. My b-day is on V-day. I still have not figured out why that makes me special.
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On Friday, February 14, 2003, urbanhumility
(1158) wrote:
tou shea --- cupid . good write
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A former member wrote:
i didn't like it much... until the last stanza, which killed me... good save, funny poem, nice job
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