The Great Defeat....
By Zhee
My stethoscope crawls down
Listening to the marauded heart,
That convulses with every breath
As blood rents its flesh apart.
Taut and tense it strains to hear
The mangled muscle choke,
The frantic flailing, the faltering,
When the crystal voice broke.
Clutching fast to the friable skin
My terrified stethoscope
pleads –
To life deserting the wreckage
Where the perished
heart bleeds.
Paralyzed, it embraces my neck,
Nestling
inside my white coat,
As we nod our confirmatory defeat
And
battle the lump in our throat.
(i guess pronouncing someone dead is one of the hardest things i
have had to do...)
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Copyright 2004 Zheala
Published on Friday, October 8, 2004.
Filed under:
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On Tuesday, February 21, 2006, blue
(1409) wrote:
Wow, what a thing to have to describe, without your footnote I do not believe this write could be fully understood or appreciated. Life it seems is without full realization without first experiencing it's frail finite course. *blessings* ~b
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On Thursday, October 28, 2004, Zahgurim
(29) wrote:
Raw emotion with blood spewing out of my monitor. I lick it to taste the pain I see. This mad me sad, but in a sadist kinda way. It's a good way though. I love this poem. PS-I failed at being "artsy-fartsy" with this comment. But it deserved a try.
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On Tuesday, October 12, 2004, stuart_pid
(135) wrote:
i think i may actually cry. you have really touched me zhee.
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A former member wrote:
wow zheala ...you have turned prolific....nice..
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On Sunday, October 10, 2004, TropicalSnowstorm
(1580) wrote:
Very well done piece! It reflects the experience of your explanatory comment at the bottom, but I think it conjures imagery that transcends this, as well. Before I saw the note,
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On Sunday, October 10, 2004, TropicalSnowstorm
(1580) wrote:
I was effected by the piece in a different way and had already read it a second time. Very well written. Ciao, T/S
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On Friday, October 8, 2004, girlafraid
(479) wrote:
this was incredible...i'm sorry you had to go through it, but the work is exceptional. I'm glad this isn't part of my job....
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On Friday, October 8, 2004, Ravenblade
(307) wrote:
this was amazing man, and I usually don't take time to read shorter writes like this....>Raven
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On Friday, October 8, 2004, Anth
(1126) wrote:
such strong emotions and concept here,striking work and excellently written