Rantings of a Killer
By Angst Queen
yea you guessed it, another oldie
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I laugh as I stare at you lieing lifeless on the ground in a puddle of
your own blood as I hold the knife that took your life
Maybe I'm pyscho, maybe I've lost it but you were such a prick I just had
to end it
I laugh, I cry, hell I don't even know why but I do it all the same. You
had no clue what kind of beast you were attempting to break and tame
You treated me like shit but ha ha it fuckin killed you. Your actions were
foolish and now there's nothing you can do.
Your eyes stare blankly ahead, blood staining the grass, ha ha, lucky I
was merciful to your ass
You fucked up and oops! your dead and I'm proud of what I've done even
though others may think that I am the one fucked in the head
Comments on "Rantings of a Killer"
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On Friday, April 15, 2005, Kinkypoptart
(555) wrote:
So much hate and intensity... my kind of poem. ~*~Tart~*~
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On Wednesday, November 10, 2004, BeautifulCalamity
(428) wrote:
love the intense hatred you possess in this, hmm. that whole sentence is ironic.. damn, i'm dumb :P.. but i can really feel this piece.. the mockery of some words.. i dunno, nicely done
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On Wednesday, November 3, 2004, DarkWolf
(415) wrote:
How twisted and interesting lol.. nicely done.. like being inside his head.. -Michael
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On Friday, October 8, 2004, Zhee
(529) wrote:
i really liked the way this was done.. i am amazed at what you were writing when you were younger! wow! :)
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A former member wrote:
Fun. Funny. Fucked up. Just like you. Just like me. ~Shane~
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A former member wrote:
well im fukked in the head too then...this is fukking awesome!!! *ScaNdaL*
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On Friday, October 8, 2004, Deadly Embrace
(41) wrote:
"Your eyes stare blankly ahead, blood staining the grass, ha ha, lucky I was merciful to your ass" That is awesome. The hatred in this piece is magnificent. Nicely done. -de