And At the End of It All

By XCryingMinotaurX

Two days into two nights.
That is all it took.
And at the end of it all,
I came crumbling.

This bed is not the same.
There will be no barter for heat.
No trick of the trade.
And at the end of it all,
I came crashing.

Two days into two nights.
That is all it took.
Friend to where I've long feared to tread.
And at the end of it all,
I've succumbed to falling inlove.

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Published on Thursday, October 7, 2004. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "And At the End of It All"

A former member wrote: Love is cruel unforgiving barbed wire. Its easy to fall over, but your torn to ribbons climbing back out. This poem is incredible
On Wednesday, February 6, 2008, Alanarchy (1168) wrote:

Beautiful. I miss your poetry.
On Thursday, January 18, 2007, MGood (60) wrote:

Oh why does it have to be this way... Why does the giving in feel so amazing that it hurts? ~Mary
On Monday, May 23, 2005, Munkey (79) wrote:

I have yet to read anything of yours that is profound and touching....amazing. -Munkey-
On Saturday, October 9, 2004, knightmirror (426) wrote:

i too have succumbed to love before and you know what it's not as bad as it seems....beautiful write if i do say so myself....****much love,chris
On Thursday, October 7, 2004, glasshouse (530) wrote:

Ah, the battle against the heart... rarely does one win such a fight... but it usually works out for the good of both side of that war. Nicely done here. Best of luck. -Glass
On Thursday, October 7, 2004, BleedSilver (298) wrote:

Well, we all have to succumb to love eventually, or we end up dying alone. This is beautiful...kinda reminds me of something I would write.
On Thursday, October 7, 2004, Angst Queen (370) wrote:

i think the others have summmed up anything i can think of with my blurry sleepy mind ::smiles:: great piece
A former member wrote: Love it...Very alluring...Amazingly beautiful and expressive...Thanx for sharing!!!*SmileZ*