A Bitter Gust Of Wind (Entangles the Soul)

By Liath

In my head and outloud
My words cut like jagged stone
Against tender skin tightly bound
In the bitter windy air, softly she moans

I've come for you, my Lade Love
I haven't forgotten what was said
Without you with me and our love from above
I would much less rather be alive than dead

Kiss me darling, unlock the doors
Allow me into the heart I adore
Guide my ship onto your sparkling shores
And we shall be one again, atleast once more

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Copyright 2004 Liath
Published on Friday, October 1, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Liath On Tuesday, October 5, 2004, Liath (35)By person wrote:

    Ohh thanks much. I'll correct those. ~ Li

  • A former member wrote: Just wanted to point out that your missing a letter or two(unless it was intentional). But thats besides the point. This was absolutely beautiful.

  • BeautifulCalamity On Friday, October 1, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (428)By person wrote:

    yes, i agree with zhee very beautiful, peaceful and , serene.. loving and fragile. very good write. :D

  • Zhee On Friday, October 1, 2004, Zhee (529)By person wrote:

    beautiful...

  • Angst Queen On Friday, October 1, 2004, Angst Queen (370)By person wrote:

    oh the fantasy that comes from this...me likes

  • whisperer On Friday, October 1, 2004, whisperer (166)By person wrote:

    wistful...i like...-]darkness[-

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