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Snake Eyes
By hate_doll
Scribbles like
Hyrogliphics
Mixed up, jumbled
Panty-stained sayings
Only we can giggle
And choke on
We burn like candles
Crackling into flickering
Waves, hoping some will wave back
I'd notice,
If rolled on clavicles
Shuddering in justified
Libido stand-offs
I could roll snake eyes
And keep you longer
Than just tonight
...whytt*04
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Copyright 2004 hate_doll
Published on Monday, August 23, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Snake Eyes"
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On Sunday, November 14, 2004, Loserland
(113)
wrote:
well written...i find it unrelatable..yet i still like it
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On Wednesday, September 15, 2004, Blood of Winter
(296) wrote:
There seems to be a lot of personal symbolism in your writings as of late...it's good stuff
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On Monday, August 23, 2004, Northstar
(374) wrote:
I love the sounds of the words you use---so nicely done, and the ending is killer
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