brainwashed nation

By mysticventures




soldiers

fighting

and

dying

for a freedom

they believe

unable

to percieve

the

illusion

of

freeing

a nation

not wanting

to be

free

of

allah's

prison

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Copyright 2004 mysticventures
Published on Monday, August 16, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Alacer_Cogitatus On Monday, August 23, 2004, Alacer_Cogitatus (140)By person wrote:

    very well thought out. good job. A_C

  • A former member wrote: You ought to get a Purple Heart for this one. I got a purple heart from reading it. Excellent!

  • DarkWolf On Thursday, August 19, 2004, DarkWolf (415)By person wrote:

    Excellent view point. Well done indeed. -Michael

  • mysticventures On Tuesday, August 17, 2004, mysticventures (527)By person wrote:

    thanks again Control - this piece hits my heart - glad you felt it too!

  • TheLastDragon On Monday, August 16, 2004, TheLastDragon (69)By person wrote:

    I couldn't agree more! Many of the poeple we try to "enlighten" about democracy are simply not ready to embrace the idea. I don't neccessarily agree that it's a prison, though. It's thier belief.

  • Northstar On Monday, August 16, 2004, Northstar (374)By person wrote:

    nice expression here--I really love the way you flow freely about a very sensitive issue

  • sixsixnine On Monday, August 16, 2004, sixsixnine (476)By person wrote:

    no shit! a serious point that seems to be ignored.... powerful messege.... ATOMIC write *669*

  • NikesRain On Monday, August 16, 2004, NikesRain (1240)By person wrote:

    short, sweet, straight forward

  • mysticventures On Monday, August 16, 2004, mysticventures (527)By person wrote:

    thanks to everyone for their support and comments -

  • elisa On Monday, August 16, 2004, elisa (1595)By person wrote:

    My brave mystic..this is a excellent example of freedom:) people have become afraid to have a 'non-PC' opinion, for fear of alienation...make's me wonder who's going to re-free us American's. very well said:) elisa

  • Anth On Monday, August 16, 2004, Anth (1126)By person wrote:

    telling it like it is,like an insect swarm,truth,in line,direct

  • mysticventures On Monday, August 16, 2004, mysticventures (527)By person wrote:

    and thank you DarkPoet for your comment

  • TheReap On Monday, August 16, 2004, TheReap (38)By person wrote:

    How true - How true!

  • DarkPoet On Monday, August 16, 2004, DarkPoet (229)By person wrote:

    concise and true Scholar

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