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Stone Out of the Ring
By Liath
Stone out of the Ring
You dropped the ball
I built up your feelings
Only to let them fall
You hate unhappy endings
You're not real
I'm not listening
I know how you feel
Your cheeks are glistening
As the ring fell
To the floor
I could tell
Our love went out the door
Through our fingers
The golden band slipped
I felt my soul take on the rigors
Our relationship, short, had been clipped
The gray and white striped stone
Rolled out of the mount
Now you're all alone
And I've fled from too many feelings to count
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Copyright 2004 Liath
Published on Wednesday, July 7, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Stone Out of the Ring"
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A former member wrote:
this was painful, I know the sound of the ring hitting the floor.
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On Thursday, July 8, 2004, Anth
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wrote:
i really like this,some inspired parts,original well written rhyme and flow, truly an excellent piece
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A former member wrote:
a well constructed peice full of meaning, nice rhyming couplets. I-S
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