You

By JiNx

I don't quite
understand you
But I think of
you quite often.
I think of what
you did to me
and how you
made me feel.

You stole something
sacred from me.
You made me feel
so worthless.
You caused me
so much pain.
Pain that still
tortures me till
this very day.
I feel like I can't
escape the past.
All these painful
memories stay right
inside my little
head,They'll haunt
me till the
day I die.
I feel like this
will never end.
Please someone
save me from this
tragic end.

I remember how you
made me feel.
I remember everything
about that night like
a broken record
in my mind.
I wish I could
escape this.

I can't handle this
emotion anymore
I hate the
way I feel.
Now I'll never be
the same and it's
all because of you.

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Copyright 2004 Jessie Nicole
Published on Tuesday, July 6, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: whoa.This is very powerful stuff. I don't know if its fair to say i liked it, because poetry like this is beyond that. it was like a punch in the chest. wow. i loved the last stanza, i felt it built extremely well...:D

  • manunkind On Friday, November 12, 2004, manunkind (64)By person wrote:

    yes (i agree with the others), i especially like the first stanza... :)

  • Nesfurata On Friday, September 17, 2004, Nesfurata (58)By person wrote:

    Wow, really good. I know so many people I could read that to. I totally know where you're coming from -Elizabeth

  • Dayer On Saturday, September 11, 2004, Dayer (162)By person wrote:

    Love it!

  • Blacken_Heart On Tuesday, July 6, 2004, Blacken_Heart (20)By person wrote:

    I love this, It relates to a conflict I'm having right now. I put it in my live journal...I gave you all the creit. Check it out if you feel like it. http://www.livejournal.com/users/crying_star6/

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