Wonderland

By Crystal Passion

And so began
Her journey then
When in the rabbit hole
She fell in

Drink me, eat me
Read the bottle and bread
And dear little Alice
Did what they said

Our tweedle dee
With brother dum
Cant even count
To number one

When slinking slyly
All the while
The Cheshire cat
Exhaults his smile

the conniving bastards
Those two men
Who ate the lil' clams
In the end

And the little mouse
With hare and hatter
Who cant decide
Who is the madder

Always late
And scarcely seen
The rabbit rushes
To his queen

And poor little Alice
Filled with dread
When her majesty ordered
“Off with her head!”

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Copyright 2004 Crystal Passion
Published on Monday, June 21, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Lovley! :)

  • glasshouse On Friday, July 2, 2004, glasshouse (530)By person wrote:

    All the fun of Wonderland wrapped up in your words. Great job. It's just as magical as the book was when first read. -Glass

  • OLd SouL On Tuesday, June 22, 2004, OLd SouL (717)By person wrote:

    lol I love Carroll.. wrote a paper in college about that story. Its really interesting to get inside that story and pick out all the hidden meanings. Awesome, awesome job. Fun read. :::OLd

  • Blood of Winter On Monday, June 21, 2004, Blood of Winter (296)By person wrote:

    Awesome piece, like something that you would read on the inside of a book for Alice in Wonderland in the prologue...

  • A former member wrote: Grace Slick would approve

  • A former member wrote: Oh my dear god, that's my favorite book/movie ever...the only thing you left out was the caterpillar. I love this. Going straight to my favorites.

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