Log In
Wonderland
By Crystal Passion
And so began
Her journey then
When in the rabbit hole
She fell in
Drink me, eat me
Read the bottle and bread
And dear little Alice
Did what they said
Our tweedle dee
With brother dum
Cant even count
To number one
When slinking slyly
All the while
The Cheshire cat
Exhaults his smile
the conniving bastards
Those two men
Who ate the lil' clams
In the end
And the little mouse
With hare and hatter
Who cant decide
Who is the madder
Always late
And scarcely seen
The rabbit rushes
To his queen
And poor little Alice
Filled with dread
When her majesty ordered
“Off with her head!â€
Unauthorized Copying Is Prohibited.
Ask the author first.
Copyright 2004 Crystal Passion
Published on Monday, June 21, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Wonderland"
Log in to post comments.
-
A former member wrote:
Lovley! :)
-
On Friday, July 2, 2004, glasshouse
(548)
wrote:
All the fun of Wonderland wrapped up in your words. Great job. It's just as magical as the book was when first read. -Glass
-
On Tuesday, June 22, 2004, OLd SouL
(732) wrote:
lol I love Carroll.. wrote a paper in college about that story. Its really interesting to get inside that story and pick out all the hidden meanings. Awesome, awesome job. Fun read. :::OLd
-
On Monday, June 21, 2004, Blood of Winter
(296) wrote:
Awesome piece, like something that you would read on the inside of a book for Alice in Wonderland in the prologue...
-
A former member wrote:
Grace Slick would approve
-
A former member wrote:
Oh my dear god, that's my favorite book/movie ever...the only thing you left out was the caterpillar. I love this. Going straight to my favorites.
Crystal Passion's Latest Works Feed
Join