It Was Fate
By celestine_moon
Our love, it was fated
And set in the stars
Though we know we'll be hurt
And reopen old scars
Our love is forever,
But in the meanwhile
Our hearts clash and crumble
In thunderous style
So much comes between us
But never enough
To fully erase love
Our hearts have grown tough
So build me a tower
Of crystals and tears
A painful reminder
Of loved and lost years
And maybe then someday
That tower she fears
Will turn into stone
With the coming of years
And we'll stand together
On this pillar strong
Yes, hand in hand, laughing
Our whole world long
But too bad dear Chris
That you were such an ass
We could have had something
But you let it pass
You built me a tower
On sawdust and spit
And now dear I know
That you're nothing but shit
*copyright 1998
Comments on "It Was Fate"
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On Tuesday, June 24, 2003, maddin foxxxy
(358) wrote:
i agree w/ cre...the flow is just great...and i like what ur trying to express...again, been there too.
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On Tuesday, July 29, 2003, Sky Singer
(153) wrote:
yes..... again, this is what i lived two months ago.... so i completely understand your pain. and yes, excellent rhyme, rhythm was wonderful, and it had nice overall flow of words.
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On Tuesday, June 24, 2003, cre
(410) wrote:
Nice ... excellent rhythm and rhyme.