Til I Bid Him Adu

By XCryingMinotaurX

Time passed for a reason and feelings were pushed away to be forgotten,
but with a slight touch it can come flooding back to induce humanly pleasures.

Same bed same room same lights same bodies,
another night spent tied down and tied up.

Beautiful, he was
then
now
forever
Beautiful, to me

Light shining off his naked body like moonglow on dark waters.
Body trembling with feverish delights and silence broken by lustful moans.

Another night spent with my beautiful poet,
and i am smiling again.
He asked to stay like this for the rest of our lives,
til death do us part.
For now this night will suffice,
til I bid him adu.

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Copyright 2004 XCryingMinotaurX
Published on Monday, May 3, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: damn good, damn good, i like it yet i don't and the only reason i don't is because of who it's about but i cannot compain for you an are both guilty of the same sin

  • knightmirror On Tuesday, May 4, 2004, knightmirror (426)By person wrote:

    WOW!!!this is amazing.of course so are you and everything i've read from you.i await more.****-knight

  • Alanarchy On Tuesday, May 4, 2004, Alanarchy (1168)By person wrote:

    Very sincere. I enjoyed this much. Great work. You have such a way with words.

  • Mistress Morbid On Monday, May 3, 2004, Mistress Morbid (405)By person wrote:

    Oh how longing..this is enchanting -Morb

  • girlafraid On Monday, May 3, 2004, girlafraid (479)By person wrote:

    this was pretty and sassy all at the same time...very cool

  • WinterGrave On Monday, May 3, 2004, WinterGrave (258)By person wrote:

    wow, this was qiute extraordinary, i enjoyed it.~~~Grave

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