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... Nihility ...
By XCryingMinotaurX
Setting sun and the gray blue sky,
I'm wondering thinking contemplating,
but I'm running through the woods again,
I'm crying laughing dying.
Days no longer drag on in telephonic limbo,
I'm passing moving lasting,
but I'm prone to find dark eyes in deep dark places,
I'm longing growing lusting.
Lungs filling up with sullen sweet smoke,
I'm gasping choking hurting,
but I'm flying higher through metal monsters,
I'm singing dancing smiling.
Cold compressed inside a black motor vehicle,
I'm wanting needing loving,
but I'm sorry for the time I've wasted,
I'm engulfing burning melting.
Beatings silenced through simple sound words,
I'm loosing failing decaying,
but I'm still purple on his warm red sheets,
I'm swooning willing hoping.
Lights out, night begins.
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Copyright 2004 XCryingMinotaurX
Published on Wednesday, March 10, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "... Nihility ..."
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On Saturday, April 10, 2004, Mistress Morbid
(405)
wrote:
Almost like the pumping of a heart. This was definitly a good write. -Morb
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On Saturday, April 10, 2004, MGood
(63) wrote:
this poem invokes so many different images...Beautiful job!
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On Thursday, March 11, 2004, hopeless
(51) wrote:
wow amazing.... the ending is wow i have no words to describe how wow it is... ~hopeless
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On Wednesday, March 10, 2004, yslehc
(334) wrote:
cool write, i like how it's written, with the "i'm.." lines and all.. nice job
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On Wednesday, March 10, 2004, knightmirror
(426) wrote:
superb.*beatings silenced through simple sound words*simply amazing with a brilliant ending.**** and well deserved.knight
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On Wednesday, March 10, 2004, girlafraid
(480) wrote:
i love the pace...feels like desperation.."telephonic limbo" is also an awesome line *afraid*
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