Angel

By nightshade

Just another lonely day
Standing here beneath your shadow
It’s just another lonely day
Where have all the memories gone
And the warm spot beside me where you used to lay
All the joyous games long gone
Encroached upon by some other familiar tune
Now I sit out in this darkness
The shadows cast around me by silver of the moon
It’s just another lonely day without you
All I wish has been swept away
Oh how I wish I could reach out and touch you
But my angel it's just another lonely day

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Copyright 2004 nightshade
Published on Wednesday, March 3, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: this struck something in me from a while ago, well written piece, and the actual format of it adds to the feeling of it

  • Railway_Butterfly On Thursday, September 16, 2004, Railway_Butterfly (354)By person wrote:

    *..Butterfly..xxx...

  • Railway_Butterfly On Thursday, September 16, 2004, Railway_Butterfly (354)By person wrote:

    ...This felt so honest.I think thats what really captured me about this piece...it just feels like you've just poured your heart out onto the page,and let it be...in its simplest form...wistful and a Lyn said...wondefully graceful...great work ..Butterfly

  • flying_fox On Thursday, March 4, 2004, flying_fox (573)By person wrote:

    Wistful is the perfect word for this...reading it is like expelling a lonely sigh. Great stuff Night, you cute thang. :) FF

  • Lynaes On Thursday, March 4, 2004, Lynaes (859)By person wrote:

    That was beautiful, very wistful and full of grace. So sad but at the same a really enjoyable read. Awesome work. ~L


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