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Untitled
By Angst Queen
He hurt her
Tore her apart
Made her want to die
He doesn't really give a damn
He doesn't care that he made her cry
She runs to me
Tears in her eyes
And I can do nothing
Nothing but hold her as she cries
I love her in the wrong way
I'll kill him for hurting her
I will make him pay
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Okay, I'm not too happy with this, but, I figured I'd post it and see what
all of you thought
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Copyright 2004 BloodRoseWolf
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A former member wrote:
i liked it! the ass hole hurts a friend and u wanna make him pay!! awww such a priceless plot! goody goody gum drops -ariel
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A former member wrote:
beautifully written
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On Tuesday, December 14, 2004, blue
(1409)
wrote:
works for me ash, nice. ~b!
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A former member wrote:
in some way it makes me feel protected! if it makes any sence! Well.... all i can say is that i love it even if you dont think its very good! it really is exalent!
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A former member wrote:
Sounds like it was written by any random boyfriend of any number of girls I've seduced and made fall in love with me before ruining them. Enjoy your victims. I'm more of a fan of the monsters.
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A former member wrote:
Every line molded me . . it's captivation left me floored. You expressed the emotion godamn amazingly. Divine write. ~*~ Rose ~*~
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A former member wrote:
i can definitely feel u here, BloodRose...check out my "Don't Push That Button"...Kinda out there; but it does give one a little knowledge on who i am and where ive been...Sometimes even where im at now...LOL Anyway, i really like it...Laterz!
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On Tuesday, October 5, 2004, Bella Butchery
(696) wrote:
i know how you feel, i am sorry to say that i have been that "him," and those guys are the worst... short but strong, there is no need for any more words< just shoot
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On Friday, October 1, 2004, murder_in_clubland
(384) wrote:
I like this btw your so cute *pinches your cheeks*~ss
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A former member wrote:
i can relate to this all too well, only, me being the one hurt, and the one wanting revenge for the guy (who'd be my ex)hurting me, being somebody who i currently love very much. mainly: beautiful! i love it! rage and anger against somebody for emotionall
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A former member wrote:
I really do like this and I know how you feel. I'm not ashamed about it though. I'm just protective.
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On Saturday, January 31, 2004, SilentStalker
(1047) wrote:
...nothing bad at all about this; it portrays rage for hurting a loved one...the honesty of it is what comes through to the reader... -Darun
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