It be

By Drayvinio

You left me when I need you
Too young to understand
That it was you not me
Who needed to change

Now you want a second chance?
Time went by too slowly
Can never forget
How you took her but not me

Flesh and blood I was
No longer so
Because I will it
It be.

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Copyright 2004 Drayvinio
Published on Saturday, January 24, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • AniDayz On Saturday, March 5, 2005, AniDayz (820)By person wrote:

    ahhh...such a painful read,one i relate to in such a way...i am speechless, but will completly 'ditto'(in respect) solace + suicideseason...theyve said it better than i could.

  • Solace On Saturday, January 24, 2004, Solace (1069)By person wrote:

    Dont give the bastards the satisfation of ruining your heart!

  • Solace On Saturday, January 24, 2004, Solace (1069)By person wrote:

    Firstly Poe is an awesome writer dont forget his short stories...I recommend Percy Bysshe Shelley as well :) Secondly this poem was awesome, youth and love shouldnt mix really in my opinion too much tragedy, second chances are not in my nature... Dont giv

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