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Dreamcatcher
By sweetambrosia
Feathers hanging down
from a spider web
woven intricately to
capture invading insects,
allowing cool breezes and
moonbeam
dreams to filter
through.
Standing ever watchful
guard
over innocence
slumbering.
Dawn erupts, dispelling all
shadows.
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Copyright 2004 Amber N. S. Hill
Published on Friday, January 16, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Friday, January 16, 2004, Juggalotus
(69)
wrote:
I do not see a new beginning as much as I wonder... Can you, like a spider, drain the energy of what gets caught and use it to your advantage?
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On Tuesday, January 20, 2004, capt_funguy
(778) wrote:
this spider seems to be on guard , not allowing the bad stuff to pass ... thus the dreams , and the breeze flow through --- he is there for the benefit of the innocents
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On Tuesday, January 20, 2004, capt_funguy
(778) wrote:
this stuff is great - funguy
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A former member wrote:
I agree, a new beginning indeed good write
~LEAH
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On Friday, January 16, 2004, BleedSilver
(298) wrote:
A new beginning is what I got from this...But unfortunately darkness falls again...but very good, and the imagery is perfect...-Mike
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