Never As It Seems

By RoseTheBrokenHearted

I looked up
To see you saying "I do"
But it wasn't me,
That you were saying it to.
I don't have a name,
Only a face.
I just know,
That she was standing in my place.
I had trembles,
All down my spine.
How could she,
Come to take what was mine?
I now wonder,
If this is how you felt?
How did you handle,
The cards that you were dealt?
I couldn't believe,
That it had only been a nasty dream.
Oh, how things,
Are never what they seem.
Do you miss me,
As I miss you?
Can you tell me,
If this has you feeling blue?

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Copyright 2019 RoseTheBrokenHearted
Published on Thursday, August 5, 2021.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Adagios On Thursday, May 2, 2019, Adagios (716)By person wrote:

    I love the simple metered rhyme that this piece holds throughout. It’s hard to not shield ones truths and state them so directly. Wonderful.

  • Divine hell On Monday, April 29, 2019, Divine hell (238)By person wrote:

    Can tell this came from deep within beautiful write, Hope you felt better after writing this.

  • Dejected_Worth On Sunday, April 28, 2019, Dejected_Worth (81)By person wrote:

    I'm feeling blue... Great write

  • Dilated View On Saturday, April 27, 2019, Dilated View (582)By person wrote:

    Uh oh. Is there ganna be a cat fight in the to be continued? I can imagine this is a lot more common at weddings than anyone will ever admit! An interesting start to what I'm guessing has more to come. Nicely done :)

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