Take me
By RedWolf
Just want to surrender, let myself go
The mask I wear is only for show
Craving for physical satisfaction
With one who shares a certain attraction
Throw me down make me your toy
A plaything for you to enjoy
Tie me up and take your time
A new favourite pastime
Tease me first, make me wet
A willing slave that needs to be pet
Don't give a chance for my body to recover
Make me forget I ever had another
Penetrate me in more ways than one
Share me with another, let them join the fun
One from the front, the other from behind
Separately or together, I don't really mind
On my knees and begging for more
Just want to be your dirty little whore
Start again, faster, make me scream
Or take it slow to the extreme
When you're done just hold me close
Melt the thorns right off this rose
If you can't love me then it's alright
Make me yours if only for tonight
Comments on "Take me"
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A former member wrote:
Wow. For a second I thought this was a poem about suicide. Good rhyme. Well structured. Keep up the good work.
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On Friday, February 15, 2019, thecitymorgue
(37) wrote:
All those mental lmages. You write so very well. Good poem.
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On Friday, February 15, 2019, Jonas Robinson
(848) wrote:
Great rhythm and meter. Excellent. :)
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On Thursday, February 14, 2019, Commander_Cadaver
(233) wrote:
Well...that was quite the ride. Nice write.