love has fallen
By molock
i was your angel,
​before my wings
were broken.
you never say " i
love you "
....sometimes
things are better
left unspoken
straight through
the heart,
i gave love away.
i flew to the stars,
but i was betrayed.
'cause of these
broken wings
i fell from grace
i was lonely,
i went to far.
i just needed someone
to hold me,
...cure this broken heart.
i used to fly where angels
sing,
now i'm bound to the
earth,
with these borken wings.
i flew to the heavens,
but i came back down.
once exalted,
love wore a crown.
now love has fallen,
like drops of rain,
to the ground.
sraight through the
heart,
i gave love away.
i flew to the stars,
love was betrayed.
cause of these broken
wings,
i fell from grace...
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Copyright 2016 molock
Author's Note:
not written from experience. just tryin' to write a love balladComments on "love has fallen"
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On Sunday, December 4, 2016, dwells
(4177) wrote:
An enigmatic piece that takes a double read to figure out who is doing what to whom, Mo - and that's a good thing since it works both ways. There are worse things than broken wings...Cheers! - Dan
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On Wednesday, December 7, 2016, molock
(312) wrote:
as always it's good to hear from you. I agree with your comment, I had 2 versions of this one then I took elements from each and made a third version, that's when it took on a life of it's own. you know I love hearing from ya, I value your insight and always enjoy your comments. cheers my friend Bret
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On Sunday, December 4, 2016, 10 Forty Three
(543) wrote:
This is wonderful. I really like the rhythm in this one. Brilliantly done. - 10:43
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On Wednesday, December 7, 2016, molock
(312) wrote:
once again thank you for commenting, you are always so kind. cheers 10: 43. later - mo