Sprinklers

By drasticdaydreams

Drops of relief
On warm white bums
Cooling the overexposed
Smiling
Lord knows we think too much
It's good to let go.
 

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Copyright 2015 drasticdaydreams
Published on Sunday, November 1, 2015.     Filed under: "Reflective" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: I think I’ve over thought this.

  • Drea On Sunday, February 7, 2016, Drea (1388)By person wrote:

    This was fun.

  • TropicalSnowstorm On Friday, November 6, 2015, TropicalSnowstorm (1580)By person wrote:

    That is hilarious! Great job! Ciao, T/S Scholar

  • rwb35 On Monday, November 2, 2015, rwb35 (64)By person wrote:

    Great way to capture the essence of a sprinkler in so few words, very nice

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