Violins at Dawn

By FadedBlues

Violins at Dawn

 
 
Each day at dawn, an old man, a maiden of the village, & a choir boy
would meet outside the church of Santa Maria to play their violins. The
music was the alarm of awakening for the people of Guernica.
 
Wives and mothers would prepare the morning meal, to fill the bellies
of their men & strengthen their resolve to fight the rebels. The women
would scold their children & send them off to classes at the schoolhouse.
 
As it was Monday, the rule of ‘lunes gerniques, golperik ez’* applied.
Chores were in abeyance, so that the populace might attend the Market
for a day of shopping & socializing.
 
The sun would rise every day in the Spanish town to the accompaniment
of violins. But on this April morning in 1937, in these days of the Spanish
Civil War, the violins would weep for the last time…
 
 
church bells cried ‘take cover!’ as warplanes flew in from
the north. citizens took refuge in cellars. 1000-lb bombs,
in booming voices, said ‘not a shelter, but a tomb.’
 
when the incendiaries dropped, Guernica’s pathways became the
streets of Hell. priests, women, children, roasted – Roasted – on
the blazing sacrificial ground. the devils, however, rode the sky.
 
sixteen hundred & forty-nine dead, primarily women & children.
as an experiment in extermination, it was highly successful.
medals of valor were awarded to the pilots.
 
the flames of the burning town reflected upon clouds
in the evening sky, perhaps to warm the feet
of the newly arrived angels…
 
 
*Translation: ‘not a stroke of work gets done on Mondays.’




 

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  • Nimue44 On Saturday, January 3, 2015, Nimue44 (296)By person wrote:

    Titles like this are enticing. I've seen the painting up front: this poem should be posted besides the description. Cruel in its plain presentation of reality.

  • BetaWolfinVA On Tuesday, July 29, 2014, BetaWolfinVA (795)By person wrote:

    very clinical dissection of the horrors of war. how our destructive capabilities and control has grown. before we destroyed cities (by flying over them in bombers) to get factories, and personnel, and barely registered the carnage, concentrating on the very real risks that our pilots and air crew now we destroy the targeted buildings (and cry when we realize that we targeted the wrong buildings based on false information or no longer accurate intelligence) Scholar

  • FadedBlues On Tuesday, July 29, 2014, FadedBlues (2168)By person wrote:

    Thanks for the nomination. this is a purpose of poetry: to keep today's students aware of the sins of the past...

  • A former member wrote: This piece is very sad.. You have penned very well a horrifying szenario of war.. The imagery was vivid and intense.. I could see the peaceful and beautiful place that Guernica was before those devils rode the sky.. And I felt the fear and agony of the innocent people who had to die.. War against innocent beings is an awful thing.. Great piece for poem of the day.. Congratulations! :)

  • A former member wrote: Very sad. Your lines gave us a strong image of the tragedy. Your final three lines were especially remarkable. Such a horrible picture, but also a lovely contrast that leaves us with a hopeful thought for the deceased.

  • A former member wrote: i didn't know how else to appreciate this amazing piece of work, so i shared it

  • FadedBlues On Thursday, February 6, 2014, FadedBlues (2168)By person wrote:

    Friends, thanks. Picasso painted a mural titled 'Guernica' to memorialize the tragedy. during the Occupation in Paris, a German officer saw the mural & asked the artist, 'did you do that?' Picasso replied, 'no. you did.'...

  • soul_versing On Friday, February 7, 2014, soul_versing (883)By person wrote:

    Wow. Irony simply put bluntly. Scholar

  • blue angel On Wednesday, February 5, 2014, blue angel (877)By person wrote:

    You placed me in the midst of horror and the church bells did shake my soul. The angels do weep in the violins sorrowful tunes. You remind us of just how blessed we are, through utter tragedy. I stand in honor... to this and you, Blues*****

  • Numbers Peppelini On Wednesday, February 5, 2014, Numbers Peppelini (76)By person wrote:

    Magnificent retelling of a tragedy, that caused even the devil to turn his head. It never roams far from me the sad refrain of both violin and cello, that cry during and in the aftermath of sorrow and regret. FadedBlues, you've outdone yourself again if that is at all possible.

  • megaprime81 On Wednesday, February 5, 2014, megaprime81 (743)By person wrote:

    Wow! You're a master storyteller. Tragic what happened, and i like the way you captured the events with such detail. 10

  • soul_versing On Wednesday, February 5, 2014, soul_versing (883)By person wrote:

    It's sad really because the German air force was used and it killed, some of an estimated, 500,000 deaths, but that's not what startled me,, blues... The whole point of the bombing was to scare Western Europe, now that's what's startling and pathetic. I cried, dammit I cries so hard. I just learned about this yesterday and this was in my notes. Violins always play a role in major catastrophes around the world. .bows head in a moment of silence. Reference: http://www.historylearningsite.co.uk/spanish_civil_war1.htm Scholar

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