Lifeless

By Deathkitten

You lay inside a white casket
still & lifeless
Leaving us shocked, confused
& deprived
One million cries couldn't bring you back

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Copyright 2013 Deathkitten
Published on Friday, August 9, 2013.     Filed under: "Tribute" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Contest & Tribute to my classmate Porsche Cobb.
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  • A former member wrote: very to the point. i like it alot.

  • A former member wrote: Nothing knocks the breath out of you quite as much as losing someone you care for, I am sorry for your loss.

  • xZombie Poptartzx On Sunday, August 11, 2013, xZombie Poptartzx (332)By person wrote:

    Beautiful tribute.... Losing someone is always hard, and i think she'd have loved this ♥ Good luck on the contest xoxo

  • Deathkitten On Sunday, August 11, 2013, Deathkitten (571)By person wrote:

    Thank you, sweetness :) oxox

  • FadedBlues On Friday, August 9, 2013, FadedBlues (2096)By person wrote:

    ...sorrow is a veil over beauty, a delicate shroud. your poem is a passionate memorial...

  • Deathkitten On Friday, August 9, 2013, Deathkitten (571)By person wrote:

    Thanks for your kind words, Faded :)

  • Intoxicating Delirium On Friday, August 9, 2013, Intoxicating Delirium (273)By person wrote:

    This is so sad, It really pulls the emotion out of me, lovely piece..

  • Deathkitten On Friday, August 9, 2013, Deathkitten (571)By person wrote:

    Thank you so much :)

  • blue angel On Friday, August 9, 2013, blue angel (866)By person wrote:

    Powerful and a lovely tribute, she was a very beautiful girl. This makes my heart ache for you; Good luck ~ It's a winner ;)~ ~*_*~

  • Deathkitten On Friday, August 9, 2013, Deathkitten (571)By person wrote:

    I brokedown last night & decided to let a little of it out. Thank you, beautiful :)

  • A former member wrote: I like this poem it really makes you think about death and losing a loved one I also like the form to the point not wordy great read

  • Deathkitten On Friday, August 9, 2013, Deathkitten (571)By person wrote:

    Those were my intentions. Thank you so much :)

  • A former member wrote: nice illustrations you used I like the line one millions cries couldn't bring you back

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