Lifeless

By Deathkitten

You lay inside a white casket
still & lifeless
Leaving us shocked, confused
& deprived
One million cries couldn't bring you back

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Published on Friday, August 9, 2013. Filed under: "Tribute" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Contest & Tribute to my classmate Porsche Cobb.

Comments on "Lifeless"

A former member wrote: very to the point. i like it alot.
A former member wrote: Nothing knocks the breath out of you quite as much as losing someone you care for, I am sorry for your loss.
On Sunday, August 11, 2013, xZombie Poptartzx (332) wrote:

Beautiful tribute.... Losing someone is always hard, and i think she'd have loved this â™¥ Good luck on the contest xoxo
On Sunday, August 11, 2013, Deathkitten (571) wrote:

Thank you, sweetness :) oxox
On Friday, August 9, 2013, FadedBlues (2096) wrote:

...sorrow is a veil over beauty, a delicate shroud. your poem is a passionate memorial...
On Friday, August 9, 2013, Deathkitten (571) wrote:

Thanks for your kind words, Faded :)
On Friday, August 9, 2013, Intoxicating Delirium (273) wrote:

This is so sad, It really pulls the emotion out of me, lovely piece..
On Friday, August 9, 2013, Deathkitten (571) wrote:

Thank you so much :)
On Friday, August 9, 2013, blue angel (866) wrote:

Powerful and a lovely tribute, she was a very beautiful girl. This makes my heart ache for you; Good luck ~ It's a winner ;)~ ~*_*~
On Friday, August 9, 2013, Deathkitten (571) wrote:

I brokedown last night & decided to let a little of it out. Thank you, beautiful :)
A former member wrote: I like this poem it really makes you think about death and losing a loved one I also like the form to the point not wordy great read
On Friday, August 9, 2013, Deathkitten (571) wrote:

Those were my intentions. Thank you so much :)
A former member wrote: nice illustrations you used I like the line one millions cries couldn't bring you back