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Gun
By Killerdemonchick
You are the colour of silver
And regardless of your warmth I still shiver
I hold you in my hand
And obey you command
Raise me up, right up to your head
And pull the trigger and now you're dead.
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Copyright 2013 Killerdemonchick
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On Tuesday, August 6, 2013, PoetessDarkly
(700)
wrote:
awesome morbidly good.
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On Monday, August 5, 2013, FadedBlues
(2168) wrote:
...cold heat, cool write...
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A former member wrote:
Short and strong, well done
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On Sunday, August 4, 2013, xZombie Poptartzx
(334) wrote:
Very well written. xoxo
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On Sunday, August 4, 2013, dwells
(4284) wrote:
Sounds like nickel-plated Nirvana, but don't fall for the trick, you see we were made to suffer - we are being tested, cheers!
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