Mortal Maze

By Deathkitten

Throw me in a shallow grave
I'm useless mass only wasting space
A blackened soul not worth the save
Disconnected from the human race
Bring me back another day
Don't make me stay
I don't wanna pray
I thought there was a better way
Keep me down with the things you say
Just throw me in my shallow grave
A better hell is all I crave
Life is such a bitter phase
I'm a little death crazed
and i'm searching for my cleansing blaze
Discomfort in these final days
Get me out this mortal maze!

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Copyright 2013 Deathkitten
Published on Saturday, May 18, 2013.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: You remind me of my friend quite a bit. Your poetry is so magnetic. I just joined but I can tell I'm going to love it. You're a great writer!

  • haunted On Sunday, May 19, 2013, haunted (837)By person wrote:

    sounds like a fucked up place to be and you put it together nice. your so psychotic I love it! lol...nice jess!

  • Deathkitten On Monday, May 20, 2013, Deathkitten (571)By person wrote:

    I know...I know haha, but damnit man, this world is but a fucked up place & these are true feelings on the matter (most days).

  • FadedBlues On Saturday, May 18, 2013, FadedBlues (2096)By person wrote:

    ...I know, kit, it's the kinda madhouse that makes you wanna blow your brains out, then write a poem abt it...

  • Deathkitten On Saturday, May 18, 2013, Deathkitten (571)By person wrote:

    Not really sure how to take this comment to be honest...so i'm going to shut up & not say anything.

  • Devilish On Saturday, May 18, 2013, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    Damn! don't go anywhere. be a good girl. stay a while. reek havoc leave your mark.. the scent of blood in the air.. fuck me. Scholar

  • Deathkitten On Saturday, May 18, 2013, Deathkitten (571)By person wrote:

    I've already left plenty marks. Just say when...

  • bobbery On Saturday, May 18, 2013, bobbery (119)By person wrote:

    All the words that are needed to describe this living hell. Ps When you die can I visit!

  • Deathkitten On Saturday, May 18, 2013, Deathkitten (571)By person wrote:

    Yes you may..

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