The Dark Angel's Song
By andhaka
I like it better when I can hear you scream
When my teeth are shredding your flesh
I enjoy it more when u try to escape
When you twist, and turn, and thresh
Your succulent heart pumps the thick juice that I desire
I can almost taste the warm moist liquid while I lick my lips
My breathing increases when I imagine ripping into your soft membrane
As I hold your quivering body in my tight grips
Oh! the way your skin peels so easily off
The way your hair softly falls on to my lap
Your lips parted open as if you are about to shriek
How easily you fell into this delicious trap.
Your bones are so crunchy and thick in my mouth
Your eyes so soft and chewy
I bite into your brain and the juices drip down the side of my mouth
Its texture so smooth and gooey
I savor the feeling of digging my calloused hands into your thick fat
A smile forms on my lips as I remember your cries and howls
While I pluck away every hair on your crispy skull
I can hear Satan’s pleased snickers and growls
When your body goes cold and most of you has been digested
I throw away your remains in the well at the end of the dark street
Dressed from head to toe in a black mourning gown
I walk silently back into my apartment suite
I am your neighbor, your friend, your colleague
You tell me secrets and talk to me everyday
But never could you see what I truly wish
Until in my well, you rot and decay
Author's Note:
My first poem on this website. I swear i'm not mental, just curious about how the human mind works and inspired to write from their point of views. i hope you enjoy.Comments on "The Dark Angel's Song"
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A former member wrote:
nothing wrong with a bit of cannibalism haha, I like how aggressive this is, it made the carnage more convincing
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On Friday, June 28, 2013, andhaka
(168) wrote:
hah thanks im glad you liked it : )
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On Thursday, June 27, 2013, dwells
(4177) wrote:
We all have those urges and this was written so very well that I really got caught up in the carnage. Wondering what brought on the bloodlust? Remind me not to drink from that well! Cheers Andy!
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On Thursday, June 27, 2013, andhaka
(168) wrote:
I read a short story that had cannibalism involved and thought it's be interesting to write from the perspective of one, that's where all this gore came on from. haha thanks I'm glad you liked it.
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On Tuesday, June 4, 2013, Melancholic VIncent
(428) wrote:
Truly a dark design from the depths of the human mind, right to the core where the irrational beast lies. Great piece.
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On Tuesday, June 4, 2013, andhaka
(168) wrote:
Thanks i'm glad you enjoyed it : )
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On Saturday, May 25, 2013, Kristoff
(37) wrote:
Scary as all hell! I love it! Love the imagery and it makes me feel like I should hide from my neighbors! Great job XD
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On Saturday, May 25, 2013, andhaka
(168) wrote:
haha thanks for reading. Your comment made me laugh. : )
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A former member wrote:
A bit disturbing, but you have used your words pretty well :)
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On Saturday, May 25, 2013, andhaka
(168) wrote:
Thanks : ) Im glad you enjoyed
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On Wednesday, May 22, 2013, PoetessDarkly
(693) wrote:
damn I got shivers from reading this.
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On Wednesday, May 22, 2013, andhaka
(168) wrote:
thanks i was going for that feel haha. I'm glad you enjoyed : )
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A former member wrote:
hmm this does sound like a very beautiful song a song fit for a dark angel i very much enjoyed this morbid write "I can almost taste the warm moist liquid while I lick my lips" your poem makes me hungry, very good poem i love it you have to write more of these poems especially one concerning blood
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On Saturday, April 27, 2013, andhaka
(168) wrote:
oh thank you. and i think i will be writing a bit more of the creepy poems. i've been working on some, but they just doesn't sound quite right but soon i promise. thanks for reading.
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On Wednesday, April 24, 2013, soul_versing
(774) wrote:
Very much enjoyed the cannibalism portrayed. I'm just glad I own, "The Zombie Survival Guide" lol Nicely penned and welcome to DP!
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On Wednesday, April 24, 2013, andhaka
(168) wrote:
Thanks a bunch. Lol i guess it's always better to be safe then sorry when it comes it zombies.
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A former member wrote:
very nice and welcome to DP i give you a 10 wonderful creativity and word flow as well as painting a nice picture
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A former member wrote:
sometimes its good to know your neighbor... sometimes its best you know your neighbor, so you can move... nice flow to this and much enjoyed
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On Tuesday, April 23, 2013, andhaka
(168) wrote:
Thank you so much.