The Dark Angel's Song

By andhaka

I like it better when I can hear you scream

When my teeth are shredding your flesh

I enjoy it more when u try to escape

When you twist, and turn, and thresh

 

Your succulent heart pumps the thick juice that I desire

I can almost taste the warm moist liquid while I lick my lips

My breathing increases when I imagine ripping into your soft membrane

As I hold your quivering body in my tight grips

 

Oh! the way your skin peels so easily off

The way your hair softly falls on to my lap

Your lips parted open as if you are about to shriek

How easily you fell into this delicious trap.

 

Your bones are so crunchy and thick in my mouth

Your eyes so soft and chewy

I bite into your brain and the juices drip down the side of my mouth

Its texture so smooth and gooey

 

I savor the feeling of digging my calloused hands into your thick fat

A smile forms on my lips as I remember your cries and howls

While I pluck away every hair on your crispy skull

I can hear Satan’s pleased snickers and growls

 

When your body goes cold and most of you has been digested

I throw away your remains in the well at the end of the dark street

Dressed from head to toe in a black mourning gown

I walk silently back into my apartment suite

 

  I am your neighbor, your friend, your colleague

You tell me secrets and talk to me everyday

But never could you see what I truly wish

Until in my well, you rot and decay

 

 

 

 

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Copyright 2013 andhaka
Published on Tuesday, April 23, 2013.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

My first poem on this website. I swear i'm not mental, just curious about how the human mind works and inspired to write from their point of views. i hope you enjoy.
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  • A former member wrote: nothing wrong with a bit of cannibalism haha, I like how aggressive this is, it made the carnage more convincing

  • andhaka On Friday, June 28, 2013, andhaka (168)By person wrote:

    hah thanks im glad you liked it : )

  • dwells On Thursday, June 27, 2013, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    We all have those urges and this was written so very well that I really got caught up in the carnage. Wondering what brought on the bloodlust? Remind me not to drink from that well! Cheers Andy!

  • andhaka On Thursday, June 27, 2013, andhaka (168)By person wrote:

    I read a short story that had cannibalism involved and thought it's be interesting to write from the perspective of one, that's where all this gore came on from. haha thanks I'm glad you liked it.

  • Melancholic VIncent On Tuesday, June 4, 2013, Melancholic VIncent (428)By person wrote:

    Truly a dark design from the depths of the human mind, right to the core where the irrational beast lies. Great piece.

  • andhaka On Tuesday, June 4, 2013, andhaka (168)By person wrote:

    Thanks i'm glad you enjoyed it : )

  • Kristoff On Saturday, May 25, 2013, Kristoff (37)By person wrote:

    Scary as all hell! I love it! Love the imagery and it makes me feel like I should hide from my neighbors! Great job XD

  • andhaka On Saturday, May 25, 2013, andhaka (168)By person wrote:

    haha thanks for reading. Your comment made me laugh. : )

  • A former member wrote: A bit disturbing, but you have used your words pretty well :)

  • andhaka On Saturday, May 25, 2013, andhaka (168)By person wrote:

    Thanks : ) Im glad you enjoyed

  • PoetessDarkly On Wednesday, May 22, 2013, PoetessDarkly (693)By person wrote:

    damn I got shivers from reading this.

  • andhaka On Wednesday, May 22, 2013, andhaka (168)By person wrote:

    thanks i was going for that feel haha. I'm glad you enjoyed : )

  • A former member wrote: hmm this does sound like a very beautiful song a song fit for a dark angel i very much enjoyed this morbid write "I can almost taste the warm moist liquid while I lick my lips" your poem makes me hungry, very good poem i love it you have to write more of these poems especially one concerning blood

  • andhaka On Saturday, April 27, 2013, andhaka (168)By person wrote:

    oh thank you. and i think i will be writing a bit more of the creepy poems. i've been working on some, but they just doesn't sound quite right but soon i promise. thanks for reading.

  • soul_versing On Wednesday, April 24, 2013, soul_versing (774)By person wrote:

    Very much enjoyed the cannibalism portrayed. I'm just glad I own, "The Zombie Survival Guide" lol Nicely penned and welcome to DP! Scholar

  • andhaka On Wednesday, April 24, 2013, andhaka (168)By person wrote:

    Thanks a bunch. Lol i guess it's always better to be safe then sorry when it comes it zombies.

  • A former member wrote: very nice and welcome to DP i give you a 10 wonderful creativity and word flow as well as painting a nice picture

  • A former member wrote: sometimes its good to know your neighbor... sometimes its best you know your neighbor, so you can move... nice flow to this and much enjoyed

  • andhaka On Tuesday, April 23, 2013, andhaka (168)By person wrote:

    Thank you so much.

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