Words
By Deathkitten
Words were spoken,
They had no sound,
Promises were broken,
No one's around,
Slur your thoughts now,
You know they're skewed,
Don't ask me how,
It's all you knew,
Words of wisdom won't follow your path,
Keep slipping around & you'll feel my wrath.
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Copyright 2013 Deathkitten
Comments on "Words"
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A former member wrote:
Loved the last two rhymes, felt like a lot of built up anger was there, and you were nice enough to offer a warning to!
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On Wednesday, January 16, 2013, FearlessDragon
(137) wrote:
Love it! Smooth flow and great rhyming pattern. Very direct and easy to relate to...
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On Wednesday, January 16, 2013, Deathkitten
(571) wrote:
Thank you all for reading :)
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A former member wrote:
simple yet not.. it says so much and so few words.. nicely done! thanks for sharing!
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A former member wrote:
Yeah I can really see what you mean. Many people don't think before they talk, and what they don't know, is that it can really hurt someone....
Very beautiful poetry!
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On Tuesday, January 15, 2013, SaintNHB
(41) wrote:
I think we all know the feeling of having something said and not hearing a thing.