Hypnotic Attraction
By Melancholic VIncent
A dark pit is enveloped by dark brown earth
Weak vegetation sprout
out from the mud-like soil
This island floats in a white-cloudy sky
An obsidian stone engulfed by chameleon lands
Fertile fields
flourish exuberant emerald meadows
Submerged by waves of crystalline
sapphire
An aquamarine mixture with a strand of sand
Sanctuary
hovering over steel-dyed haze
When braced in a glance
Hearts
synchronize
Both skip a beat
Anomalies occur
Time lordship
is denied
Sparks ignite volatile passion between us
Reanimate
my cold-dead heart
You eclipse the sun with your scintillate
figure
Grants you an aura of golden wings
Sunlit filaments that
caress your tender face
I bow down in awe as gazing your splendor
Angel-like sculptured untainted by sin
Prototype of beauty, untamed
heroine
Compelled by magnetic urges
Our bodies collide
and explode in an eruption of passion
Embraced in impetuous euphoria
We carve on each other's skin symbols of our bitter-sweet rapture
As both reach the apogee of ecstasy
Author's Note:
To my source of passionate inspiration...Comments on "Hypnotic Attraction"
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On Tuesday, August 21, 2012, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
...well-phrased & artful portrayal of abiding love...
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On Wednesday, August 22, 2012, Melancholic VIncent
(428) wrote:
I appreciate your words wise man! It's inspiring and move me to keep on writing. Again, many thanks sir
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On Tuesday, August 21, 2012, Nehema
(958) wrote:
So nice to read a tribute to a worthy muse, especially one so well written, much enjoyed - XXOO
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On Tuesday, August 21, 2012, Melancholic VIncent
(428) wrote:
She is a worthy muse yes :)
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On Tuesday, August 21, 2012, Invisible Girl
(134) wrote:
exquisite word choices.. a beautiful passionate tribute my friend. well done
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On Tuesday, August 21, 2012, Melancholic VIncent
(428) wrote:
The first part is describing my eyes, and the second my girlfriend's eyes. Thanks