Loose Ends

By Melancholic VIncent

Sometimes i feel hate… heating my blood till boiling point
Sometimes I feel rain… dropping by like bullets
Sometimes I feel rage… shaking the four courners of the earth
Sometimes I feel high… at high speed in the highway to hell

Sometimes I feel cold… freezing my body in a figurine of stone
Sometimes I feel fear… ripping off the back of my neck
Sometimes I feel dumb… Hanging my head low in worn old memories
Sometimes I feel numb… Hanging my head high in some ancient tree

The cold kiss
The high loss
The bitter sigh
The dark nest

Sometimes i feel blue... gazing up to a gray cloudy sky
Sometimes I feel blur... roaming erratically in another dimension
Sometimes I feel lost... wandering bare-footed in scalded sands
Sometimes I feel fake… knowing not who do I really am

Sometimes I feel dire... dictating the omen of tragedies
Sometimes I feel dare... jumping forward into the cliff
Sometimes I feel like... stepping inward into the unknown
Sometimes I feel just... dying for this suffering to end

The dying wish
The lessen strength
The pending future
The intermittent heart

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Copyright 2012 Melancholic VIncent
Published on Monday, July 30, 2012.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Made it some time ago, it's a simple poem, some loose ends of thoughts and feelings, and made it look like it. Not a very elaborate one. But I think the result wasn't bad.
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  • Invisible Girl On Tuesday, July 31, 2012, Invisible Girl (134)By person wrote:

    All those loose ends.. perhaps if they are braided they would be more easily handled? Gather them up my friend and bind them! You have the power- claim it!

  • FadedBlues On Monday, July 30, 2012, FadedBlues (2096)By person wrote:

    ... yes, random thoughts & feelings, patched with wisdom...

  • Melancholic VIncent On Wednesday, August 1, 2012, Melancholic VIncent (428)By person wrote:

    Thank you sir

  • A former member wrote: I like this, it's different, refreshing, and unique thanks for sharing the scattered senselss workings of your inner mind.

  • Melancholic VIncent On Wednesday, August 1, 2012, Melancholic VIncent (428)By person wrote:

    I guess all our thoughts came in by "scattered senseless workings", the process of making sense of them is afterwards. Thanks for the insight

  • dwells On Monday, July 30, 2012, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    Tying them up nicely and there will always be those loose ends to contend with - nevertheless, the fewer the better and how about some tight ends maybe? (no football puns)

  • Melancholic VIncent On Monday, July 30, 2012, Melancholic VIncent (428)By person wrote:

    At the time I made it, I had some random thoughts and phrases that I didn't know how to fit together, and then I made this. Yes I have to do something more with more light. Thanks for the comment Dan

  • dwells On Monday, July 30, 2012, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    TIGHT ENDS - old Football joke!

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