Loose Ends
By Melancholic VIncent
Sometimes i feel hate… heating my blood till boiling point
Sometimes
I feel rain… dropping by like bullets
Sometimes I feel rage… shaking
the four courners of the earth
Sometimes I feel high… at high speed
in the highway to hell
Sometimes I feel cold… freezing my
body in a figurine of stone
Sometimes I feel fear… ripping off the
back of my neck
Sometimes I feel dumb… Hanging my head low in worn
old memories
Sometimes I feel numb… Hanging my head high in some
ancient tree
The cold kiss
The high loss
The bitter
sigh
The dark nest
Sometimes i feel blue... gazing up to
a gray cloudy sky
Sometimes I feel blur... roaming erratically in
another dimension
Sometimes I feel lost... wandering bare-footed in
scalded sands
Sometimes I feel fake… knowing not who do I really
am
Sometimes I feel dire... dictating the omen of tragedies
Sometimes I feel dare... jumping forward into the cliff
Sometimes
I feel like... stepping inward into the unknown
Sometimes I feel just...
dying for this suffering to end
The dying wish
The lessen
strength
The pending future
The intermittent heart
Author's Note:
Made it some time ago, it's a simple poem, some loose ends of thoughts and feelings, and made it look like it. Not a very elaborate one. But I think the result wasn't bad.Comments on "Loose Ends"
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On Tuesday, July 31, 2012, Invisible Girl
(134) wrote:
All those loose ends.. perhaps if they are braided they would be more easily handled? Gather them up my friend and bind them! You have the power- claim it!
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On Monday, July 30, 2012, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
... yes, random thoughts & feelings, patched with wisdom...
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On Wednesday, August 1, 2012, Melancholic VIncent
(428) wrote:
Thank you sir
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A former member wrote:
I like this, it's different, refreshing, and unique thanks for sharing the scattered senselss workings of your inner mind.
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On Wednesday, August 1, 2012, Melancholic VIncent
(428) wrote:
I guess all our thoughts came in by "scattered senseless workings", the process of making sense of them is afterwards. Thanks for the insight
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On Monday, July 30, 2012, dwells
(4177) wrote:
Tying them up nicely and there will always be those loose ends to contend with - nevertheless, the fewer the better and how about some tight ends maybe? (no football puns)
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On Monday, July 30, 2012, Melancholic VIncent
(428) wrote:
At the time I made it, I had some random thoughts and phrases that I didn't know how to fit together, and then I made this. Yes I have to do something more with more light. Thanks for the comment Dan
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On Monday, July 30, 2012, dwells
(4177) wrote:
TIGHT ENDS - old Football joke!