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"give me strength"
By Forever Cold
i can feel it,
i can feel you walking away from me..
i can feel it in everything in me...
i stay silent inside...
i fear to wake the best i fear in you...
no matter just what i feel, i will stay silent...
Pain in me is crying...
I wonl't let you slip away,
Everyone around me knows that is pain inside is killing me.
i am not sure you even see it yet...
If just what i fears comes true..
i will die befor i see you in the arms of her..
i will die if i see you embrace her...
this blood keeps flowing inside my vains,
it wants to be set free...
gods above help me,
my plea, give me the strenght to keep him...
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Copyright 2003 Jilley_
Published on Sunday, July 20, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Sunday, August 31, 2003, Ophelia
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wrote:
You write with such saddness and pain, but your words only produce a beautiful work................O.
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On Sunday, July 20, 2003, maddin foxxxy
(358) wrote:
i can find myself in between those words...very well done!!
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On Sunday, July 20, 2003, Rebel_Angel
(321) wrote:
wow! I like this. Many people feel they have to compeat to keep their bf/gf. It is a crazy world out there and if someone wants something bad enough they will do everything to have it!
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On Sunday, July 20, 2003, Aurora_Light
(472) wrote:
very powerfull
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