phantasy dancer
By FadedBlues
she moves
naked onto the stage,
slow, seductive, a somnolent cat.
the gray
shades of this temple reveal
only one color: her red Rita Hayworth
hair.
the drum-noise of Night Train, tempestuous tempo,
high decibel, conquers the room, and claims the
back rooms where
the other dancers wait;
sniff, shoot up, impale themselves...
to escape their sordid reality.
insistent speakers vibrate,
the naked girl writhes,
her fingers tangled in her hair.
hips
gyrate, to the left, to the right, hypnotic,
demanding, kindling Desire's
fire.
when her legs spread, the scent of wildflowers
whispers
into the smoke and the whiskey melodies.
in the shadowed pit,
hungry eyes memorize her
beauty, begging embrace, dreaming unholy
dreams.
somewhere, another world spins, civilizations rise
and
dominate, fall and repeat...
but not here.
the drums,
the shadows, the dancer, the watchers,
they cry for their own salvation.
the naked girl dances.
hungry eyes devour her nakedness.
wildflowers perish in smoke.
Author's Note:
...rapture...Comments on "phantasy dancer"
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On Tuesday, November 12, 2013, blue angel
(866) wrote:
very exotic in many ways, seductive words you place so carefully, and I enjoyed seeing my nick name in it too, ha;) nice one blues**** (kindling)
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On Thursday, March 29, 2012, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
Friends, thanks for joining me in the audience, no cover, no minimum...
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On Thursday, March 29, 2012, Corinthian
(306) wrote:
Don't forget to tip your dancer and waitress ;)) wink *
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On Thursday, March 29, 2012, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
Tips Dakrismena.. lol.. Love my queen...
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On Thursday, March 29, 2012, dwells
(4177) wrote:
I think I know this club and Big Red too! Stark detail and so real, are you sure you aren't a performer too? (HA)! Cheers FB and much enjoyed this exquisite slice of life.
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On Thursday, March 29, 2012, Corinthian
(306) wrote:
A somnulent cat ..... oh my goodness I adore that ..... very very sexy ...Rita Hayworth what a beautiful visual.... I find this whole thing so sexy and classy ... makes me think of one of my idoless's the beautigul Lily St Cyr...
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On Thursday, March 29, 2012, Corinthian
(306) wrote:
Somnolent even*
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A former member wrote:
how perfect?with a sense of harmony through contradictions
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On Thursday, March 29, 2012, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
I was dancer for 10 years.. one of the best in the state. magazines, travel, one night stands.. a time to remember.. but i think it was me that loved my naked body more than anyone else could.. memmmmmmories.....
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On Thursday, March 29, 2012, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
you need to write your memoirs...
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A former member wrote:
This was artistic. I really liked this. ALOT. I love dancing and this was rythmic and sensous..and I liked the worlds that were falling apart.