-Madness The Mouse; Part 1, Shadows of a Gunslinger-
By sTr8-jAcKeT
Madness was of many things, his cape was
black as coal,
He scrounged at bottles cast aside,
sand-blasted into gold.
His eyes like fires, never seen;
embers...moaning cinders...
A spine made alien from metal mending,
cyber splendors.
Scars or modifications running rampant
through his heart,
Computer chips & CPUs, rebooting
[brain] on every start.
Failure's not an option that the
factory puts in,
Or brings us to this planet; baring
eager, guilty sin.
You see; Madness was a mouse that
liked to tear open his caves,
Gnashing at the veins of gold, inside
his rants & raves.
Yearning for his Midas, he embraced
the amber dust,
The city of a broken mind; still-caverns
bleeding rust.
The tumbleweeds of tureen dreams;
just shivers, once attached,
To growing rampant vines, now choking
victims of your past.
Strands of heat from burning sands,
curvacious distant hills,
Engulfing furnaced fantasies; blazing
fuel in every thrill.
Consuming ghost-like visions, nightmares;
gripping, zombie hands,
Mortify the richeous, shackled-chains
across the lands.
These were all the people, that
had lived within the trees,
Quite like him; it's eery... can't
he see they're never pleased?
So in this story, as it's said;
our hero will be cast,
Into the smiles of Abyss & conscience
universal blasts.
"Madness! Madness! Come old
friend!" I remember saying,
"You're the first of life I've seen
since the giant started slaying."
At first I wasn't nice to me, we
both adjusted to ourselves,
And within our desperate lives we
each hung mirrors on the shelves.
There's so many hollowed, crystal
hallways; haunting hours endless run,
The light so bright, they'd fry
your eyes; cooked barely over done.
Well Madness in this wild trip,
soon saddled up revenge,
And coaxed himself from nervousness,
a habit's clutching binge.
Spirit-spirs upon his boots, he
loads pistols with his dreams,
Now weilding power greater than
Olympus trickled streams.
Through thousands of his wars; he's
maintained his will to live,
And retains his own inceptions that
he's one that's still to give.
Eons in his madness, Madness saw
the distant's rise,
The Tower of The Heartress soon
beacons as a prize.
And off he rides again, the canyons
pull the sunlight down,
Skeletal, the buzzards watch; with
hungered... anxious frowns.
Next time you'll hear the story
of adventures yet to come,
When Madness buckles down; and,
into the sun, he runs...
Author's Note:
-Part 1-Comments on "-Madness The Mouse; Part 1, Shadows of a Gunslinger-"
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On Saturday, March 30, 2019, 10 Forty Three
(543) wrote:
Here we go. A vast vocabulary and imagination along with vivid imagery makes for a sophisticated piece of art. The way you introduced the character and the setting as well as how you concluded we’re masterfully done. I can’t wait to read the next ones. - 10
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On Saturday, March 30, 2019, sTr8-jAcKeT
(697) wrote:
Thank you, sir. Thank you for tagging along with Madness on his journey with peeled-eyes. He sure does like the company.
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On Friday, December 7, 2018, SolApathy
(652) wrote:
A mouse of madness or technological splendor...The thoughts may never properly render. As a machine myself I find I can understand what the mouse is divining to find. Soul or soulless it may never know, but it will never stop searching to understand what it may never know. Drift within the cybernetic antipathy of emotion...Perhaps one day it will cry --a sign of its devotion. I thoroughly enjoyed this write. I feel it is a journey that may never truly end. --Is this a result of programming or a search to find what is within?
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On Friday, December 7, 2018, sTr8-jAcKeT
(697) wrote:
Hmm... Damn how I love the way you put things. It will never-end, thank you for the intelligence of writing more poetry in your responses. Madness is quite thankful, he'll always search to be, whatever life has thrown, and fair SolApathy. Thank you friend.
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A former member wrote:
Superbly entertaining! Very well done!
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On Tuesday, March 27, 2012, sTr8-jAcKeT
(697) wrote:
Glad you enjoyed it my friend.
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On Sunday, March 25, 2012, dwells
(4177) wrote:
Some unique and wildly imaginative lines to be sure. Wilted Rose had an excellent comment too. Cheers! Much enjoyed.
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On Sunday, March 25, 2012, sTr8-jAcKeT
(697) wrote:
Hey dwells; thanks brother. Glad I could spark the ol' imagination. l8r