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Technicolor Nightmare
By FadedBlues
Dreams occur in black & white.
Rainbows
of nightmares highlite the fright.
Vivid visions of livid collisions.
Concepted remains of tainted refrains.
Cash in on the passion
for fashion.
& faster we master the scope of disaster.
All
hope is distorted when love is aborted.
The truth that we seek is
faceless & bleak.
A dreadful decision that made your incision.
A rollercoaster ride to your suicide.
And this is the cost:
Everything
is lost.
And Nothing is the power
We hold like gold.
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Copyright 2012 FadedBlues
Published on Thursday, February 2, 2012.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
...don't eat a large pizza at bedtime...Comments on "Technicolor Nightmare"
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A former member wrote:
Very nice write! Thank you for this. Cheers!
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A former member wrote:
The wording for this is excellent, i really enjoyed it. 'A dreadful decision that made your incision. A rollercoaster ride to your suicide.' Loved it, write on.
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On Tuesday, March 6, 2012, Slingnasty
(138)
wrote:
Awesome word play FB
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On Friday, February 3, 2012, FadedBlues
(2169) wrote:
Friends, new ones & long-time alike, thanks for the inspiring words...my take on the things that haunt us...
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On Thursday, February 2, 2012, Phantasmagoria
(121) wrote:
I love this, the title definately drew me in, I'm bookmarking!
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On Thursday, February 2, 2012, Devilish
(2658) wrote:
You know i'm a big fan of word play and ryhme. Gave me alil chill and possibly some moisture...lol. I love it!!
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On Thursday, February 2, 2012, darling93demon
(81) wrote:
loved the wordplay. i like you :)
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On Thursday, February 2, 2012, Magdalena
(615) wrote:
Love the flow, a fab write blues.
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On Thursday, February 2, 2012, dwells
(4285) wrote:
This was a good public service message to anyone considering suicide I think, summed up nicely in the last stanza. Probably the pepperonis, cheers and thanks for posting.
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