Technicolor Nightmare

By FadedBlues

Dreams occur in black & white.
Rainbows of nightmares highlite the fright.

Vivid visions of livid collisions.
Concepted remains of tainted refrains.

Cash in on the passion for fashion.
& faster we master the scope of disaster.

All hope is distorted when love is aborted.
The truth that we seek is faceless & bleak.

A dreadful decision that made your incision.
A rollercoaster ride to your suicide.

                 And this is the cost:
                 Everything is lost.
                 And Nothing is the power
                 We hold like gold.

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Published on Thursday, February 2, 2012. Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

...don't eat a large pizza at bedtime...

Comments on "Technicolor Nightmare"

A former member wrote: Very nice write! Thank you for this. Cheers!
A former member wrote: The wording for this is excellent, i really enjoyed it. 'A dreadful decision that made your incision. A rollercoaster ride to your suicide.' Loved it, write on.
On Tuesday, March 6, 2012, Slingnasty (137) wrote:

Awesome word play FB
On Friday, February 3, 2012, FadedBlues (2096) wrote:

Friends, new ones & long-time alike, thanks for the inspiring words...my take on the things that haunt us...
On Thursday, February 2, 2012, Phantasmagoria (121) wrote:

I love this, the title definately drew me in, I'm bookmarking!
On Thursday, February 2, 2012, Devilish (2633) wrote:

You know i'm a big fan of word play and ryhme. Gave me alil chill and possibly some moisture...lol. I love it!!
On Thursday, February 2, 2012, darling93demon (81) wrote:

loved the wordplay. i like you :)
On Thursday, February 2, 2012, dwells (4177) wrote:

This was a good public service message to anyone considering suicide I think, summed up nicely in the last stanza. Probably the pepperonis, cheers and thanks for posting.