disorderly- asylum door #2

By anathema

psych*as*the*nia

(noun)

: a neurotic state characterized esp. by phobias, obsessions, or compulsions that one knows are irrational

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they
say
i'm
obsessive
obsessive
obsessive
obsessive
but i'm not
obsessive
obsessive
obsessive
obsessive
perhaps it's
excessive
excessive
excessive
excessive
i think it's
expressive
expressive
expressive
expressive
and quite
impressive
impressive
impressive
impressive
if slightly
oppressive
oppressive
oppressive
oppressive
they
say
i'm
obsessive
obsessive
obsessive
obsessive
but i'm not
obsessive
obsessive
obsessive
obsessive

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Published on Tuesday, July 8, 2003. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "disorderly- asylum door #2"

On Wednesday, March 10, 2004, flying_fox (571) wrote:

damn. speechless. this is SO good. Am moving to door #3... Fox
On Tuesday, September 16, 2003, SilentStalker (1047) wrote:

....on to door# 3, I'm hooked...
A former member wrote: I like that one
On Wednesday, July 9, 2003, Jonas (715) wrote:

your charactarizations of these disorders is quite livable... plays like an empty drive in movie ampitheatre, crackling sound as the speakers turn on and arcan scenes play
On Wednesday, July 9, 2003, IceDragoness (193) wrote:

there's something eerily cute about this one ~Dawn
On Wednesday, July 9, 2003, Six-Out (1423) wrote:

Indeed, very creative. Bravo.
A former member wrote: whoa..crativity...havent seen that around these parts since... **explodes**
A former member wrote: I second Nemo's comments and want to mention I feel ya!
On Tuesday, July 8, 2003, Midnight Phoenix (240) wrote:

This was a fun piece for me. I like how the colors actually worked subtly with the piece. Too many people here use colors too profoundly.
On Tuesday, July 8, 2003, anathema (50) wrote:

This poem is about obsessive compulsive disorder... amusingly enough, though this poem is in fours... i always did things in threes... ah well.
A former member wrote: minx, this was very good. i fought OCD for years and finally beat it... well well done.