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Communion in the Dark
By WoundsLikeStars
To dine on your flesh,
Refreshed by your dark, red wine
You,
the Last Supper
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Copyright 2011 WoundsLikeStars
Author's Note:
"Senryu" would be more accurate.Comments on "Communion in the Dark"
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On Thursday, November 24, 2011, TyrantAvDetForbannet
(274)
wrote:
i had to come back to this, it's metal as F**K!
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A former member wrote:
very impressive, the thing i like about short works is they let the mind fill in the rest. this created the start of a story for me. welcome.
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On Thursday, November 10, 2011, TyrantAvDetForbannet
(274) wrote:
Excellent \m/
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On Tuesday, November 8, 2011, whisperingwalls
(219) wrote:
This had such force behind the imagery and references, they pack quite a punch; especially in this format.
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A former member wrote:
Wonderfully done
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On Sunday, October 30, 2011, lupus tenebrae
(872) wrote:
Partaking of the flesh and blood, communion through consumption, a classic and revered concept. I too have a certain affinity for senryu, I find their minimalism to be just as pungent as their more meaty brethren. Write onward.
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On Saturday, October 29, 2011, Devilish
(2658) wrote:
Hello there.. I'm lovin it! I wana welcome you to DarkPoetry... Sorry I hadn't made it here sooner... I like your style.. And I see you got comments from the greates writers... I'm impressed...
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On Saturday, October 29, 2011, WoundsLikeStars
(56) wrote:
I had a poetry professor in college who DESPISED Haiku and Senryu. I think that made me love it even more so. Thanks for the encouragement.
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On Saturday, October 29, 2011, dwells
(4285) wrote:
Nice twist on the religious phraseology. It gives the last supper a whole new outlook, thanks.
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On Saturday, October 29, 2011, Alchemist
(688) wrote:
I have just recently started writting and enjoying Haiku/Senryu poems. Great write.
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