-Pull Your Hair-

By sTr8-jAcKeT

 A wisp of air,
On lips so bare,
I felt the grip of lust.

Eyes still teaming,
Ferocious screaming,
Positions we adjust.

With light so dim,
From candle rim,
Hot breath our only sight.

Panting & sweating,
Gripping & wetting,
Flesh now pressed so tight.

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Copyright 2011 sTr8-jAcKeT
Published on Monday, October 24, 2011.     Filed under: "Erotica" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

This was a short done thinking of the great, primal pleasure of life; but making you want more.
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  • sadistic intent hex On Saturday, August 17, 2019, sadistic intent hex (206)By person wrote:

    I Love erotic poetry it really paints the primitive side sex can come too. I to wish it was longer lol.

  • sTr8-jAcKeT On Sunday, October 6, 2019, sTr8-jAcKeT (697)By person wrote:

    Hah, thanks. I felt its short length reminded me of being in a dark cabin, stranded in the middle of a winter mountain. Somehow it seems to help solidify in my mind at least.

  • 10 Forty Three On Sunday, March 24, 2019, 10 Forty Three (543)By person wrote:

    I kind of wish this one was longer so I could get longer lol. It was quite sensual and hot. W/d - 10

  • sTr8-jAcKeT On Sunday, March 24, 2019, sTr8-jAcKeT (697)By person wrote:

    Haha, I fucking lost it on that remark! That was great.

  • Samael Crowe On Thursday, December 6, 2018, Samael Crowe (173)By person wrote:

    I always enjoy such brilliantly written erotic poetry. Very vivid imagery;)

  • sTr8-jAcKeT On Thursday, December 6, 2018, sTr8-jAcKeT (697)By person wrote:

    Kudos, I felt it didn't have enough imagery. Thanks though.

  • A former member wrote: Yummy, me likes. Pull my hair!!!

  • Ladyhawke On Monday, February 6, 2012, Ladyhawke (392)By person wrote:

    Damn, you are addictive!!! This piece, while I am quite aware of the sexual part, find myself wandering.... Dare I say I see more to this than just sexual pleasure? I think I do......

  • A former member wrote: Great use of words. Definitly Hot!!

  • sTr8-jAcKeT On Friday, January 6, 2012, sTr8-jAcKeT (697)By person wrote:

    Thank you.

  • A former member wrote: Pretty hot.

  • sTr8-jAcKeT On Thursday, October 27, 2011, sTr8-jAcKeT (697)By person wrote:

    I thought so.

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