Secret Fire

By Evil Ash

burning eye's of secret fire

clashing against skin so pale

dreams they come words of a lier

alabaster walls,pristine in detail


tossed into a sea of loathing

feelings arise as if they must

stars are born in an instant of growing

life styles change all in trust


pulses quicken to tempos of lust

rhythms of magic rise on the waves

soft winds that carry the dust

in heart felt love , he catches what he craves



stacking the grains,one by one

time in motion,crashing against 

walls he built made of granite and bone

for in his might he found his heart was unfenced


for in his eyes

a secret fire

burns for her

in his

alabaster

cell





 

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Copyright 2011 Evil Ash
Published on Thursday, October 6, 2011.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • haunted On Thursday, October 6, 2011, haunted (837)By person wrote:

    hey evilash, very nice poem you have written, i enjoyed it! i was also wondering if dr. frankenstein ever installed that vagina on your "dark horse evangeline" lol!? right between the seat and gastank! seriously, this is a great poem!

  • dwells On Thursday, October 6, 2011, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    Sounds mutual to me. Third stanza tripped me up a bit and last stanza(?) was a complete form change. Alabaster is one of my favorite words too, thanks.

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