Dark Embrace's
By Evil Ash
cold dark embraces
littered rooms of lost and found
fleshly pleasures
always enhances
the depravation of souls
crimes of passion,orgasmic
murder
her dark form comes on high
she takes me to depths and
even further
leaves me wanting ,sometimes begging
oh the
shame ,it comes and goes
tastes of pain and razor kisses
i
stand
firm ,but oh she knows
inside i quiver ,veritable slave
i wear my scars as if proud
the tingles of pain,fresh in my heart
thoughts of her in her funeral shroud
palest skin of the whitest
alabaster
hair as black as a ravens feathers
how did i
fall so far into the dark
as i walk to return to her
my fingers
trace her painful mark
my pulse it quickens
as i approach
all fears are gone
sight of her is all i know
almost as if i
hear the sirens song
her lips pursed into a sneer
i bow
my head a subserviant slave
i stand before her willing and ready
a soft carress on my cheek is what i crave
but i know its a hot
mess that waits for me
Comments on "Dark Embrace's"
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A former member wrote:
You have an incredible way with words that draws me in every time.
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On Wednesday, September 28, 2011, dwells
(4177) wrote:
Ah yes, the hot mess of putrefaction makes for a messy romp with newly dead(HA) - nice write but still thinking on the inspiration, a glimpse into personal desire and depravation, perhaps?
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On Saturday, October 1, 2011, Evil Ash
(53) wrote:
sort of correct my fellow poet,a decree of thoughts that i succumb to
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On Wednesday, September 28, 2011, dwells
(4177) wrote:
Make that "depravity" (depraved) instead of "depravation" (deprived) which is actually "deprivation" mispelled? (you've got me doing it now)
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On Wednesday, September 28, 2011, haunted
(837) wrote:
wow evilash, a really powerful poem, i thought almost this could be a drug addiction write, and im still wondering if this has duel meanings, but interpritation is in the eye of the beholder. i love this. fantastic!
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On Wednesday, September 28, 2011, Evil Ash
(53) wrote:
its a mix of drug addiction and lustful rants