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mistakes
By Evil Ash
rain..the indisputable staines of life
running down my cheeks leaving
cold spots refelcting strife..
steam rising from my body as the rain
covers my soul
a blackened thing it is ,once shown bright now left
with a dark hole
alone i walked and alone i fall,beaten and torn
scared and tested and a bit forlorn
cold and dark the beating of
hearts ,alone and insane the thoughts in my brain
taking what is and
what should have never been,leaving a trench a bloody stain
stark
raving mad ,manic thoughts left to be had
all i have left ,my oldest
enemy
me and myself ,twisted as any
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Copyright 2011 EVILASH
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On Friday, September 9, 2011, haunted
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wrote:
oh my god! i love your poems. this one really speaks to me. i can't wait to read your others. im faving you!
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On Friday, September 9, 2011, dwells
(4177) wrote:
Stiff upper lip old chap, as they say in the old country. Sounds like women problems unless I miss my guess? Don't be too hard on yourself because it take two to tango (I prefer the cha-cha).
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On Friday, September 9, 2011, Evil Ash
(53) wrote:
foolish times lead to foolish deeds,all i do it seems is screw my life up till it bleeds
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