Bloodflow

By Legions Slave

I lie on my bed
A bloody razor blade lies on my nightstand
Blood flowing from my wrist
All goes dim
My colors start to fade
No one around to see me die
No one around to care if I die
My colors have faded
All is black now
I die unnoticed by the world around me

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Copyright 2011 Legions Slave
Published on Thursday, August 25, 2011.     Filed under: "Ironic" and "Poetry"
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  • Nixx On Saturday, August 27, 2011, Nixx (235)By person wrote:

    i've tried this.. i woke up the next morning cold with permanently stained bloody sheets.. it sucked! welcome to DarkPoetry.

  • Devilish On Tuesday, October 11, 2011, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    I think your beautiful miss and that comment was good enough to be all the comments he cud have got on this.. wow... Scholar

  • Devilish On Thursday, August 25, 2011, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    Hmmmmm... Well I wud care if you died... Stay around and show off some of them talents... Scholar

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