Blue Giant

By Blood Saga

It's like that, you know.


Because love
burns brightly
until it flickers out
. . .quietly. . .
like a dying star.

And God
crushes it
under His boot.

. . .

You know?

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Copyright 2011 Blood Saga
Published on Tuesday, May 24, 2011.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Gray Vision On Wednesday, June 22, 2011, Gray Vision (424)By person wrote:

    Just the title caught my eye and now this, a painful reminder of the truth but my light is still burning bright and is looking for another to unite. A wise person once told me, good things come to those who wait, it's proven to be true thus far and I don't mind waiting some more, thank you for sharing =)

  • A former member wrote: please, do not take this the wrong way..but i hate that you wrote something that kills me. in effect, devastatingly done. crushing [for me] in heart, spirit, mind......you know?

  • Blood Saga On Tuesday, May 24, 2011, Blood Saga (78)By person wrote:

    Oh, my dear, you have no idea how much your comment means to me. And thank you to everyone else as well for taking the time to write a little something about my ramblings.

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