impure

By SourInnocence

Impure
Corrupt
I’ve been tainted.
Hopeless
Faithless
I’ve been betrayed.
Nostalgic
Naïve
I’ve been shattered.
Rage
Sorrow
I’ve been wasted.
Black
Just black
I’ve been happier.


~~i'm experimenting with some new ideas please comment~~

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Copyright 2003 SourInnocence
Published on Monday, June 23, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • diavolessa On Monday, June 23, 2003, diavolessa (207)By person wrote:

    I think its nice. It's like a list of feelings! {Dk}

  • Ophelia On Monday, June 23, 2003, Ophelia (221)By person wrote:

    I like it, it made me stop and think for awhile which is hard to do. Nice lots of feeling.

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