college OD

By BrokenAngel

 the ink running low in her pen
she sits in the empty lecture hall

trance beats dancing in her head
she watches a show on the main floor

cold concrete beneath her bare feet
she burns alive, collapsing in overdose

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Copyright 2010 BrokenAngel
Published on Thursday, September 23, 2010.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: beautiful

  • A former member wrote: hmmm the feeling is overwhelming... sometimes those lectures can be.... love the apparent tensions... the contrast between the empty hall and the show on the main floor.. the cold concrete and the burning.... sounds like a case of tmi, haha. nice.

  • johnbevan17 On Thursday, September 23, 2010, johnbevan17 (52)By person wrote:

    Very sad, so much to live for, the dance of life just to collapse, broken on the floor. good write.

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