Day of Age

By Rowan

A day of age but not of change,
of growth, but alas no different.
Emotions wane as the days fade
and so ends wishes of happiness.

The sun sets on a day of rest,
with relaxation seeping to bone.
Life continues along its axis
never slowing for anyone lost.

Discovering a forest of dreams,
dense in certain dark corners.
Where streams needed bridges
to cross over a threshold denied.

The worlds your own completed
and first steps taken in paradise.
No boundaries to hold freedom,
independence in mind's eye.

A bright future awaits on your day,
but beware of Earth's persuasions.
Dangers to those of naivete's sister,
for the day of age may be horrid.

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Copyright 2010 Rowan
Published on Monday, August 30, 2010.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Alchemist On Sunday, July 31, 2011, Alchemist (679)By person wrote:

    I loved it, it was so well written just the style I like.

  • A former member wrote: I loved this. i feel like it speaks personally right now to me.... long time no chat, btw.

  • A former member wrote: Another beautiful poem Rowan. Really feels like my past birthdays. Sort of like as I get older, the less each seems to mean.

  • A former member wrote: Wow its so true we have changed the world around us so much without undergoing no change at all. Great write once again :)

  • lupus tenebrae On Monday, August 30, 2010, lupus tenebrae (860)By person wrote:

    Amazing piece, it sounds like a prophecy for a great cataclysmic event at the end. The image of the forest of dreams was well conveyed, thanks for sharing. Scholar

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